February 29, 2008
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Focus
Focus
Focus on your fingers
Feel the warmth
Your hand in mineFocus on your lips
Feel the depth
This love divineFocus on your hair
It’s feel upon
My fingertipsFocus on your skin
The taste of you
Upon my lipsThough gone so long
My senses still
Recall the daysMy soul made whole
When I did give
My heart away28Feb08
Comments (12)
Focus on your soul
Freed as we entangled
Together dancing
I used autofocus. I never knew what I was missing!
Check out some of my recent poetry and go ahead and comment!
some things are never forgotten... the sense memory never forgets
There is a lot to be said for pining the loss of a loved one! I don't know of any greater pain.
did you mean "of" in verse four and "senses" in verse five?
dan
This is lovely... Thank you for sharing. peace
Beautiful lady, just beautiful.
Wonderful work!
Focus... so hard... wish I had autofocus.
what a lovely tribute to a loved one; well wrought with sweet ebb and flow, and strong rhyme...thank you for sharing. I shall return!
sage
This is beautifully said , Margot .
Love
Michel
And what about you , MY FRIEND ?
Michel
wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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